ok, so your first issue jackd is not happy… check your audio setup, and test it by running jackd from command line (described above)
norns.init does not need amixer , nor i2cset - this is covered in the doc I posted above.
also make sure you have edited according to how I describe.
(in particular the after clause is important to add)
also to debug, these things, if you stop/kill them, you can then run them from the command line one at a time, to get better error messages.
what hardware are you running this with? screen/encoders/sound card?
its not going to work at all well with the built in soundcard on the rPI, as its rubbish, and very cpu heavy… perhaps go look at pisound which is on sale this weekend 
sorry, i know this is all a bit vague but i don’t have a lot of time for this today